My English
Hello! My name is Tanya. I am from Russia (or maybe, "I'm Russian"). I live in Krasnoyarsk, Siberia. I really want to improve my English; specifically to work on speaking and listening comprehension. I have a strong motivation for this. At present, when I read an English text I understand most of it, but when I watch American films I can usually only pick out a few words.
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My English
Hello! My name is Tanya! I am from Russia. I live in Krasnoyarsk in Siberia. I very much want to learn English, and to speak it. I am strongly motivated. When I read a text in English, I can understand almost all of it. But if I watch an American film, I understand only a few words.