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what are the cause of water scarcity and how can we solve this problem? People live in the world have to depend food and water,without food and water people can just be survive 3 days but if have water then the survival time will become 7 days. thus we can see water is important in our life.however nowadays the water scarcity is decrease. Now the society is a industry society that means we have a mass of factories.This is a reason of why water scarcity.we have to use water to help most produce are made out and water will become dirty during the process of make product.Besides some factories do not know how to make the water to be clean as before. We can not use dirty water again and again.Moreover, people is life activity also have to depend water supply such like make food ,do the laundry and grow crops. More people live in the earth means we need more water and more crops but the land is limit and the water is same.Furthermore,a mass of forest are be cut off .As we all now forest are the best way to keep water. It is will help land do not be desertization. The basic solution of water scarcity is to keep environment balance and improve the water conservation.To keep environment balance we have to grown more plant and do not cut off forest we have to gown one tree when we cut one tree.Secondly, I believe that government have to increase mange the factories which are waste water and cause water pollution. Above all.I believe that we also have to keep do not waste water in our mind due to everyone is the main season to cause of water scarcity and waster water. In conclusion ,there are have many reasons cause of water scarcity and solve it which is not a short time business.We have to do it everyday and keep it in our mind.
20 de mar de 2013 00:59
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What are the cause of water scarcity and how can we solve this problem?

People who live in the world have to depend on food and water.  Without food and water, people can only  survive 3 days, but if they have water, then the survival time will become 7 days. Thus, we can see water is important in our life. However, nowadays the water scarcity is increasing.

Today, society is a industrial society, which means we have a mass of factories.This is a cause of why water scarcity. We have to use water to help most industrial production and water will become dirty during the process of making products. Besides, some factories do not know how to make the water to be as clean as before. We cannot use dirty water again and again. Moreover, people's is life activities also have to depend water supply such as making food, doing the laundry and growing crops. More people living in the earth means we need more water and more crops, but the land is limited and so is water. Furthermore, a mass of forests are being cut off. As we all know, forests are the best way to keep water. It is will help land avoid desertization.

The basic solution of water scarcity is to keep the environment in balance and improve the water conservation.To keep environmental balance, we have to grow more plants and do not cut down forests. We have to grow one tree when we cut one tree. Secondly, I believe that governments have to increase management of the factories that produce waste water and cause water pollution. Above all, I believe that we also have to be careful not to waste water, in our mind due to everyone which is the main season to cause of water scarcity and waster water.

In conclusion ,there are have many reasons causes of water scarcity and solving it which is not a short-term business. We have to do it everyday and keep it in our mind.

 

<em>[Very good.  You need work on your verb tenses.]</em>

20 de março de 2013
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