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A angry dog On Thursday night a stray dog bit me on the left leg. I was going down a street in my neighborhood, suddenly I felt a mad dog, but I didn't think the dog was mad with me, when I felt his teeth on my leg, I felt a burning pain. That night I went to a clinic for medical attendance. The doctor applied me regulatory vaccines against infection and against rabies. Today I was asking for pet owners, but this is a stray dog. I hope this accident will not affect my health. So you take care of a stray dog. Please, correct my mistakes.
28 de abr de 2013 01:44
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An angry dog

On Thursday night a stray dog bit me on the left leg. I was going down a street in my neighborhood, when suddenly I felt saw (or heard) a mad dog, but I didn't think the dog was mad with at me,. When I felt his teeth on my leg, I felt a burning pain. That night I went to a clinic for medical attendance assistance. The doctor applied me gave regulatory vaccines against infection and against rabies. Today I was asking around for pet his owners, but this is a stray dog. I hope this accident will not affect my health.

So you take care of a stray dogs.

Please, correct my mistakes.

28 de abril de 2013
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An angry dog

On Thursday night a stray dog bit me on the left leg. I was going down a street in my neighborhood, when suddenly I felt a pain in my leg, a mad dog had bit me, but I didn't think the dog was mad with me, when I felt his teeth on my leg, I felt a burning pain. That night I went to a clinic for medical assistance. The doctor gave me regulatory vaccines against infection and against rabies. Today I was asking for pet owners about it, but this is a stray dog. I hope this accident will not affect my health.

So you, watch out for stray dogs.

Please, correct my mistakes.

 

I hope you fell much better Sonia

1 de maio de 2013
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An angry dog

On Thursday night a stray dog bit me on my left leg. I was going down a street in my neighborhood, when suddenly I felt the bite of a mad dog, but I didn't think the dog was mad with me. (es chistoso porque la diferencia entre "mad" que significa loco cuando decimos "mad dog" o "mad" como enojado) When I felt his teeth on my leg, I felt a burning pain. That night I went to a clinic for medical attention. The doctor applied typical vaccines for infection and to combat rabies. Today, I was asking for pet owners about it, but this is a stray dog. I hope this accident will not affect my health.

So, you watch out for stray dogs.

Please, correct my mistakes.

Como siempre es un placer porque escribes muy bien! :)

28 de abril de 2013
Sonia, I see that at least two people already corrected this. But, it is An Angry Dog, not A Angry Dog. You need to write An because the beginning of the next word starts with a vowel. Wow. I just read the whole article. I sure hope you don't get rabies from that dog. What is the time period before you know.
22 de maio de 2013
Oh my friends Andre and Craig, I've missed you so much. I'm very happy to see you again. Thanks for the comments. Andre, I was wondering about that dog, and this animal don't have owner, but I have cautioned what this is a dangerous dog, to several people in the neighborhood. Kisses to you Sonia
16 de maio de 2013
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