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My nose was bleed. Yesterday I wrote a notebook entry.But I selected the wrong type.So maybe you hadn't see my stomach.At the end of it,I hope to have a good dream,but terrible things was happened,my nose was bleed at 2:00 am,like a volcano exposed ,my sleeping clothe and my boyfriend's pillow were spotted by bleed.After the bleed was stopped ,I lay on the bed and could't fall asleep.Beijing is so hot and dry.The season is not good for me without medicine.I will go to hospital but it's hard to enroll it. Thank you for correct.
12 de mai de 2013 13:46
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My nose was bleeding.

Yesterday I wrote a notebook entry, but I selected the wrong type, so maybe you haven't seen my stomach. At the end of it, I hoped to have a good dream, but terrible things happened, my nose bled at 2:00 am, like a volcano, my pajamas(or nightclothes, depending on which variant of English you are learning, if you are learning American english it is pajamas, if you are learning British English then it is nightclothes) and my boyfriend's pillow were spotted with blood. After the bleeding stopped, I lied down on the bed and couldn't fall asleep. Beijing is so hot and dry. The season is not good for me without medicine. I will go to hospital, but it's hard to be admitted into it.

That's not good, I know how it feels to have constant nosebleeds, I get them too.

19 de maio de 2013

My nose was bleeding.

Yesterday I wrote a notebook entry but I selected the wrong type. So maybe you hadn't see my stomach. At the end of it, I had hoped to have a good dream but terrible things happened. My nose was bleeding at 2:00 am, like a volcano, my sleeping clothes and my boyfriend's pillow were spotted by blood. After the bleeding stopped i lied on the bed and could't fall asleep. Beijing is so hot and dry. The season is not good for me without medicine. I would go to the hospital, but it's hard to enroll it.

14 de maio de 2013
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