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The Train I am visiting my relatives this week. I moved to another city two years ago, that's why I meet with them only one time a two month. I am going to my home town tomorrow. I have taken the train ticket. The way will take about 10 hours. However, there is a very good schedule - I start my way here in the evening and I will be there in the next day morning, so only one night in the train. What about you? What kind of public transport do you prefer?
20 de mai de 2013 10:56
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The train

I was visiting my relatives this week. I moved to another city two years ago, that's why I met with them only one time two months. I'm going to my house tomorrow. I have taken the train tickets. This will take about 10 hours. However, there is a very good schedule - I started way back here in the evening and I will be there in the morning the next day, so it was only one night on the train.

 

Hello Irene, I just changed a few words to make it good language in order

21 de maio de 2013
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The Train

I am visiting my relatives this week. I moved to another city two years ago, that's why I meet with them only one time a two month. I am going to my home town tomorrow. I have purchased the train ticket. The trip will take about 10 hours. However, there is a very good schedule - I will leave here in the evening and I arrive there the next morning, so it's only an overnight train ride.

What about you? What kind of public transport do you prefer?

 

 

 

Hello Irene. Your text was fine. I just changed a few words to make it sound more natural. My preferred means of transportation here in the USA is the car, but when I lived in Switzerland it was also the train. 

20 de maio de 2013

The Train

 

I am visiting my relatives this week. I had moved to another city two years ago. that's This is why I  meet with them only one time a two once or twice in a month. I am going back to my home town hometown tomorrow. I have taken already bought the train ticket. The way trip will take about 10 ten hours. However, there is a very good the schedule is great - I start my way here in the evening and I will be there in the next day morning. so Only one night spent in the train.

What about you? What kind of public transport do you prefer?

 

In Los Angeles, because of its far flung distances (we calculate in minutes/hours not in miles!) and its poor public transport system, travelling by your own car is the most convenient.

20 de maio de 2013
I was visiting my relatives this week. I moved to another city two years ago, that's why I met with them only one time two months. I'm going to my house tomorrow. I have taken the train tickets. This will take about 10 hours. However, there is a very good schedule - I started way back here in the evening and I will be there in the morning the next day, so it was only one night on the train. Hello Irene, I just changed a few words to make it good language in order
21 de maio de 2013
I like to take long-distance train too. It is very interested that you can chat with passenger on the train. I hope to take more time on the trian
20 de maio de 2013
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