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My Dream My dream is to develop my own game. I really want to make my own games, so I have a plan to make a game until this year. Maybe it'll be a hard time, but I love to make games. Now I have been working as a software engineer at a medical software company. I had worked as a programmer at game software company. Now passed about 6 years, I will restart my dream. It's time to move into my dream, it will come true. Anyway I couldn't sleep well yesterday because I thought about my dream, job and future. After all, I decided to make better life for dream. If I will be able to release my game, I will tell all you guys. Have a great days.
19 de jun de 2013 06:34
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My Dream

My dream is to develop my own game software. I really want to make one, so I planed to create a game software until this year. Maybe it'll be hard but, I will love to make games.

Now I have been working as a software engineer at a medical software company.
I work as a programmer at game software company for 6 years, I think its time to start my dream and to move forward it so that it will come true.

Anyway I couldn't sleep well yesterday because I thought about my dream, job and future. After all, I decided to make better life for dream.

If I will be able to release my own game software, I will tell all you guys.

Have a great days.

 

 

 

=) just be careful with your verb tenses and redundancy of words,,=) so far good job!

20 de junho de 2013
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