Paqui
will live our children in a worse envoronment than we do? In the last fifty years the quality of the atmosphere has been decreasing very fast. The environmental problems are every day in the news, and although population and government are taking concious, we still have a long way to walk. There are several environmental problems that affect our health directly, but also others will have consequences in the future, and our children could suffer these consequences. Firstly, the quality of the air we breath is worse every day, and many people are becoming allegic. A problem that didn't exist a few years ago. Secondly, the destruction of rainforest is probably one of the most important cause of the global warming, because many trees are being cutting down, and these are the main lung of the Earth. On the other hand, thanks to some preventive meassures and to techological advances, some problems will be solve and won't have drastic consequences in a near future. In short, I feel optimistic about the future, and I think that our children won't live in a worse environment than we do.
2 de dez de 2013 19:32
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will live our children live in a worse envoronment than we do?

In the last fifty years the quality of the atmosphere has been decreasing very fast. The environmental problems are every day in the news, and although the people population and government are taking action concious, we still have a long way to go walk.
There are several environmental problems that affect our health directly, but also others will have consequences in the future, and our children could suffer these consequences.
Firstly, the quality of the air we breath is worse every day, and many people are developing allergies are becoming allergic. This is a problem that didn't exist a few years ago.
Secondly, the destruction of rainforest is probably one of the most important causes of the global warming, because many trees are being cutting down, and these are the main lung of the Earth (not sure what you wanted to say. This last phrase was correct as a sentence, but we would probably not say it in that way).
On the other hand, thanks to some preventive measures and to techological advances, some problems will be solved and won't have drastic consequences in a near future.
In short, I feel optimistic about the future, and I think that our children won't live in a worse environment than we do.

 

Paqui- Very nice job.  After reading Rachel's correction, I felt I had to provide a different view..... I think Rachel may have erred on a couple of points.  -sven

16 de dezembro de 2013
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will live our children live in a worse envoronment environment than then we do?

In the last fifty years the quality of the atmosphere has been decreasing very fast. The environmental problems are shown everyday in on the news, and although population and government are taking concious action, we still have a long way to walk.
There are several environmental problems that affect our health directly, but also there are others that will have consequences in the future, and our children could suffer these consequences.
Firstly First off, the quality of the air we breath is worsening every day, and many people are becoming allegic. This is a problem that didn't exist a few years ago.
Secondly, the destruction of rainforest is probably one of the most important cause of the global warming, because many trees are being cutting down, and these are the main lung of the Earth.
On the other hand, thanks to some preventive preventative meassures measures and to techological advances, some problems will be solved and won't have drastic consequences in a the near future.
In short Overall, I feel optimistic about the future, and I think that our children won't live in a worse environment than then we do.

2 de dezembro de 2013
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