Do you usually shop on-line?

On-line shopping become more and more popular for young people. I think one of the imprortant reasons is convenience and saving time. You can browse and select all kinds of goods which you want, and just sit before your computer instead of going everywhere. Furthermore, logistics distribution problems which most people have never worried about now is improved.  If you palce an order on-line today, you will get the goods tomorrow.

I often shop on-line on the website 360buy.com(jd.com), because there is a big jd store nearby my home, so I can go there pick up goods myself. If I order at evening, I can pick up the purchase next morning before going to work; if I order in the morning, I can pick up the goods after work.

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