First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Amily .I like the movies, listen to songs and Painting.I am very pleased to be here.I hope everyone can learn from each other.

I like the movies, listen to songs and Painting

Should be:
I like watching movies, listening to songs, and painting.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

mMy name is Amily . I like the watching movies, listening to songs and Ppainting. I am very pleased happy to be here. I hope everyone here can learn from each other.

 

Try to add space before start of each sentence and after commas.

 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Amily .I like the watching movies, listening to songs and Painting.I am very pleased to be here.I hope everyone can learn from each other.