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A Memo to All Staff(2) You are a human resources manager for a large manufacturing firm. To offer staff better health insurance, the company has recently changed its insurance company. A representative from the insurance company is visiting to present the new policy. In your memo you should: * say what has happened and why. * announce the representative's visit. * say when and where his presentation will take place. Write 40-50 words only. Remember to include a To, From, Date and Subject line. To: All staff From: HR Manager Date: 19 March Subject: A representation from the new insurance company As you are probably aware, we has recently changed our insurance company to provide you with better health insurance. Therefore, a representative from the new insurance company is visiting us. Please note that he will give a presentation on Thursday 27 March at 4.30pm in the conference room to outline the new policy. Any staff is welcome to attend.
19 de mar de 2014 07:08
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A Memo to All Staff(2)

You are a human resources manager for a large manufacturing firm. To offer staff better health insurance, the company has recently changed its insurance company. A representative from the insurance company is visiting to present the new policy. In your memo you should:
* say what has happened and why.
* announce the representative's visit.
* say when and where his presentation will take place.
Write 40-50 words only. Remember to include a To, From, Date and Subject line.

To: All staff
From: HR Manager
Date: 19 March
Subject: A representation from the new insurance company
As you are probably aware, we has have recently changed our insurance company to provide you with better health insurance. Therefore, a representative from the new insurance company is visiting us. Please note that he will give*1 a presentation on Thursday 27 March at 4.30pm in the conference room to outline the new policy. Any All staff is  are2* welcome to attend.

 

 

1* because you state the exact time to make it sound really fixed you could say 'will be giving'

2* or maybe 'any member of staff is welcome'... but it sounds like you don't expect many to attend.

eg 'Any member of staff is welcome to present their suggestions for improvement of our ...'

19 de março de 2014
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