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你很无聊吗? 唉, 有两台电脑游戏机,一台笔记本电脑,一个箱子摆满了各种玩具和游戏,两个自行车,几百本书,一个很大的蹦床,也有艺术品多得数也数不过来,都让我是一个不好的妈妈,而你没有什么事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它们都带走了,你来看看你能做什么。这样你才会明白无聊的感觉啊! So, 2 computer games consoles, a laptop, an overflowing chest of games and toys, 2 bikes, hundreds of books, a trampoline, and more art stuff than you can shake a stick at, makes me a terrible mother and means you have nothing to do. Right oh, boy. Lets see how much you have to do if I take it all away. Then you'll really know the meaning of bored!!
14 de abr de 2014 15:52
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你很無聊嗎?
唉, 有兩台電腦遊戲機,一台筆記本電腦,一個箱子擺滿了各種玩具和遊戲(建議寫法:一個擺滿了各種玩具和遊戲的箱子。 "A of B" we usually translate to "B的A"),兩自行車(單車的單位是「輛」或「臺」),幾百本書,一個很大的蹦床(彈簧床),也有藝術品多得數也數不過來,讓我是一個不好的媽媽(建議寫法:變成一個糟糕的媽媽。Even you didn't use "became", but we still need to insert a verb),而你沒有什麼事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它們都帶走了,你來看看你能做什麼。這樣你才會明白無聊的感覺啊!

 

※ Well done :)

14 de abril de 2014

你很无聊吗?

唉, 有两台电脑游戏机,一台笔记本电脑,一个箱子装(摆means exhibit, 装means fill the case with stuff)满了各种玩具和游戏,两自行车,几百本书,一个很大的蹦床,也有艺术品多得数也数不过来,都让我是一个不好的妈妈,而你没有什么事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它们都带走了,你来看看你能做什么。这样你才会明白无聊的感觉啊!

Do you really take all the stuff away? Or you are just bluffing to help your kids grow up. 

So, 2 computer games consoles, a laptop, an overflowing chest of games and toys, 2 bikes, hundreds of books, a trampoline, and more art stuff than you can shake a stick at, makes me a terrible mother and means you have nothing to do. Right oh, boy. Lets see how much you have to do if I take it all away. Then you'll really know the meaning of bored!!

16 de abril de 2014
你的汉语很棒。但是还是要注意下数量词的搭配哦
15 de abril de 2014
an overflowing chest of games and toys .一个箱子摆(or盛、装)满了各种玩具和游戏。我觉得你说的很准确。或者也可以这样说:各种玩具和游戏多得连一个箱子都快放不下了。 你的汉语越来越地道natural了,不错。
15 de abril de 2014
Honestly , I'm not quite understand what makes yo a terrible mother,both English and Chinese : (
14 de abril de 2014
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