Are These Okay? : 他明天要去Hamilton Orchards，我也明天也要去Hamilton Orchards。
Okay, this is my first time writing anything in Mandarin Chinese, so please cut me some slack if I make any mistakes. Anyhow, can you tell me if I wrote these correctly in Simplified Chinese? I am trying to practice the sentence pattern "Someone does something. I also do the same thing." using 也 which several native speakers gave me in an earlier question of mine. I have placed optional words in the English translations in parentheses. I have placed an asterisk (the star character which looks like *) before any explanations of English words. :)
1. 他明天去Hadley，我也明天我也去[Hadley/那辺]。 [My preference, since the emphasis is on the time]
He is going to Hadley tomorrow. I am also going to Hadley tomorrow.
* Hadley is the name of a town here.
2. 他昨天喝了咖啡，我也昨天我也喝了咖啡。
He drank (a cup of) coffee yesterday. I also drank (a cup of) coffee yesterday.
3. 他去过Goshen，我也去过Goshen。
He has been to Goshen. I have also been to Goshen.
* Goshen is the name of a town here.
4. 他下个月打算读The Stone Giant，我也下个月打算读The Stone Giant.
a. He plans on reading "The Stone Giant" next month. I also plan on reading "The Stone Giant" next month.
b. He's planning on reading "The Stone Giant." next month. I'm also planning on reading "The Stone Giant" next month.
* We say both (a) and (b) in English.
5. 他上个星期买了个手机，我也上个星期买了个手机。
He bought a cellphone last week. I also bought a cellphone last week.
6. 他要买咖啡，我也要买咖啡。 This has the meaning of buying large amounts of coffee, say a bag etc. Same situation as in "He wants to buy coffee". Hence if you just want to get a cup, you must have a classifier, in this case, 杯
He wants to buy a (cup of) coffee. I also want to buy a (cup of) coffee.
7. 他要读The Lord of the Rings，我也要读The Lord of the Rings。
He wants to read "The Lord of the Rings." I also want to read "The Lord of the Rings."
8. 他明天要去Deerfield，我也明天也要去Deerfield。
He wants to go to Deerfield tomorrow. I also want to go to Deerfield tomorrow.
9. 他读过Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma，我也读过Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma。
He has read "Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma" (before). I have also read "Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma."
10. 他喜欢 桃子，我也喜欢桃子。
He likes peaches. I also like peaches.
11. 他明天要去Hamilton Orchards，我也明天也要去Hamilton Orchards。
He wants to go to Hamilton Orchards tomorrow. I also want to go to Hamilton Orchards tomorrow.
* Hamilton Orchards is the name of an orchard and sugar shack here where you can pick apples and get breakfast during the fall. Attached is a photo of a road leading through the orchards where you pick the apples at. At some point, I will post a photo of the sugar shack too. :)
Are These Okay? : 他明天要去Hamilton Orchards，我也明天要去Hamilton Orchards。
Okay, this is my first time writing anything in Mandarin Chinese, so please cut me some slack if I make any mistakes. Anyhow, can you tell me if I wrote these correctly in Simplified Chinese? I am trying to practice the sentence pattern "Someone does something. I also do the same thing." using 也 which several native speakers gave me in an earlier question of mine. I have placed optional words in the English translations in parentheses. I have placed an asterisk (the star character which looks like *) before any explanations of English words. :)
1. 他明天去Hadley，我也明天明天也去Hadley。“也” should come AFTER the word that specifies the time. Therefore, your 2nd, 4th, 5th, 8th and 11th Chinese sentences also need to be corrected.
He is going to Hadley tomorrow. I am also going to Hadley tomorrow.
* Hadley is the name of a town here.
2. 他昨天喝了咖啡，我也昨天喝了咖啡。
He drank (a cup of) coffee yesterday. I also drank (a cup of) coffee yesterday.
3. 他去过Goshen，我也去过Goshen。
He has been to Goshen. I have also been to Goshen.
* Goshen is the name of a town here.
4. 他下个月打算读The Stone Giant，我也下个月打算读The Stone Giant.
a. He plans on reading "The Stone Giant" next month. I also plan on reading "The Stone Giant" next month.
b. He's planning on reading "The Stone Giant." next month. I'm also planning on reading "The Stone Giant" next month.
* We say both (a) and (b) in English.
5. 他上个星期买了个手机，我也上个星期买了个手机。
He bought a cellphone last week. I also bought a cellphone last week.
6. 他要买咖啡，我也要买咖啡。
He wants to buy a (cup of) coffee. I also want to buy a (cup of) coffee.
7. 他要读The Lord of the Rings，我也要读The Lord of the Rings。
He wants to read "The Lord of the Rings." I also want to read "The Lord of the Rings."
8. 他明天要去Deerfield，我也明天要去Deerfield。
He wants to go to Deerfield tomorrow. I also want to go to Deerfield tomorrow.
9. 他读过Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma，我也读过Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma。
He has read "Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma" (before). I have also read "Dragonlance: The Legend of Huma."
10. 他喜欢 桃子，我也喜欢桃子。
He likes peaches. I also like peaches.
11. 他明天要去Hamilton Orchards，我也明天要去Hamilton Orchards。
He wants to go to Hamilton Orchards tomorrow. I also want to go to Hamilton Orchards tomorrow.
* Hamilton Orchards is the name of an orchard and sugar shack here where you can pick apples and get breakfast during the fall. Attached is a photo of a road leading through the orchards where you pick the apples at. At some point, I will post a photo of the sugar shack too. :)
