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Nice tonight It is been ages we did not have a chance to talk together. last night , it was a nice tonight with me. I and my friends had time to eat dinner,used prefernce drinks and talked conversation each other.all of people were very happy when told about life ourselves.
19 de abr de 2014 02:08
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Nice tonight

It is been ages we did not have a chance to talk together. last night , it was a nice tonight with me. I and my friends had time to eat dinner,used prefernce drinks and talked conversation each other.

<em>of the many</em>, <em>this is most important so I would like to share it. Do not repeat similar words like for example you would not say " I wrote writing the letter"  wrote is past , writing is present so similarly you don't need "talked" and "conversation". It is " We talked to each other " or " had a conversaton with each other".... take care you will get there I am sure..good job</em>

all of people were very happy when told about life ourselves.

19 de abril de 2014
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