Assylbek
My first note Hi. My name is Assylbek and I would like to introduce myself. I'm working in IT field over 8 years, using English on my daily work. Love to write on Russian, running my own blog about self development. Had previously experience in running up a small business. Interested in technology and management (project and people). Someday I will start writing blog on English with somebodies help in grammar corrections :).
24 de abr de 2014 06:03
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My first note

Hi. My name is Assylbek and I would like to introduce myself. I have worked working in the IT field for over 8 years, using English on my daily work. I Love to write o in Russian and running my own blog about self development. I Had previously had experience in running up a small business. I am interested in technology and management (projects and people). Someday I will start writing a blog oin English with somebody'sies help inwith grammar corrections :).

 

 

Welcome Assylbek! Great job, remember to use a subject with each sentence. You can't just use a verb in English.  Also maintain verb agreement (see yellow). Either you should say I love to write and run my own blog or I love writing and running my own blog. These are minor things. Keep practicing and you will improve.

Best wishes,

Alex

24 de abril de 2014
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