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My only love
My mom is very unique person in my life. I can't imagine my life without her. She loves me unconditionally , listens to me, prepares my food and helps me in with my homework. She always encourages me to be myself and become better each day. She makes me smile when I become sad and screams at me when I become lazy think. I am the luckiest person in this planet because I have her in my life.
Notes: unique cannot be qualified as it is absolute. I know that you often see it qualified (as you have done) but you should not do that.
Watch your capitals for
. the first letter of a word in a new sentence.
. for yourself I talk to myself ---- not --- i talk to myself.
. you are having some difficulty with past and present tense
had is past tense which is not appropriate for your wonderful mother.
My only love
My mom is a very unique person in my life. I can't imagine my life without her. She loves me unconditionally , listens to me, prepares my food and helps me with my homework. She always encourages me to be myself and become better each day. She makes me smile when I become sad and screams at me when I become lazy. I think I am the luckiest person on this planet because I have her in my life.
اهههه هي انتي!
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