Hudson
First experience Hi. That's my first time writing something in Italki, so here I go. My favorite hobby is running. I also like play the guitar and hanging out with my friends. I like eat fruits, vegetables, barbecue, steak, massa and pizza. I'd like to get better at English and help another people to speak a foreign language. It's all for today.
18 de jul de 2014 00:57
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First experience

Hi.

That's This is my first time writing something in Italki, so here I go.

My favorite hobby is running. I also like playing the guitar and hanging out with my friends.

I like to eat fruits, vegetables, barbecue [this doesn't really fit in this sentence. Barbecue is a method of cooking food, rather than a food itself. I suggest perhaps "barbecued food"], steak, massa and pizza.

I'd like to get better at English and help another people [This is plural so should be "other people". If singular, then it should be "another person"] to speak a foreign language.

It's That's all for today.

 

18 de julho de 2014
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