what are we looking for ? I was always thinking about the meaning of life .Someone chases for money ,someone chases for love ,someone chases for authority.As for me ,i'm confused ,i don't know what i

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what are we looking for ? I was always thinking about the meaning of life .Someone chases for money ,someone chases for love ,someone chases for authority.As for me ,i'm confused ,i don't know what i am running after .When i was a kid ,i desperately want to grow up ,however ,as far as i become older ,i wanna get more .i wanna be loved ,i wanna be rich ,i wanna a good job ,i wanna more friends ,i got these ideas in my head which crazy me ,so that i nearly forget what i originally wanted was .

29 de jul de 2014 02:34

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what are we looking for ?

I was always thinking about the meaning of life .Someone chases looks for money ,someone chases looks for love , and someone chases looks for authority power. As for me ,i'm confused ,i don't know what i am running after .When i was a kid ,i desperately wanted to grow up ,however ,as far as i become older ,i wanna get more my interest for getting older goes up as I grow up.i wanna be loved ,i wanna be rich ,i wanna want a good job ,i wanna want more friends ,i got have these ideas in my head which crazy me drives me crazy, so such that i nearly forget what i originally wanted was .

Chase" means to physically run after something. For example, "police chased the stolen car through the city".

Wanna" stands for "want to" so you cannot say "I wanna (want to) a good job"

25 de julho de 2016

Here is my revised version of your paragraph:

What are we looking for?

I always think about the meaning of life. Some people chase after money, some chase after love, some chase after authority. As for me, i'm confused; i don't know what I am running after. When I was a kid, I desperately wanted to grow up however, now that I have become older, I want more. I want to be loved. I want to be rich. I want a good job and I want more friends. All of these ideas in my head are making me crazy so much so that I've nearly forgotten what it is I originally wanted.

**Be sure to be careful with your punctuation and spacing.

Good work :)

25 de julho de 2016