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holiday This year unfortunately I can't go on holiday. I haven't any money to go to Holiday. I hope that the new job could give me the opportunities to earn money. I hope to meet on this community people that will enjoy me.
2 de ago de 2014 09:19
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Hi Ilenia, 

 

This is really good, just a few corrections in bold :)

 

holiday

This year unfortunately I can't go on holiday.
I haven't got any money to go to Holiday.
I hope that mythe new job could give me the opportunities to earn money.
I hope to meet people on this website who will like meon this community people that will enjoy me.

2 de agosto de 2014

holiday

This year unfortunately because  i don't have the money I can't go on holiday.

Only when  I get a paid job will I  be able to save money to do so.
I hope to meet in this community people that will enjoy corresponding with me

3 de agosto de 2014

Holiday

This year unfortunately I can't go on holiday.
I haven't any money to go to holiday.
I hope that the my new job will could give me the opportunity ies to earn money.
I hope to meet friends on italki. on this community people that will enjoy me.

2 de agosto de 2014
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