对不对?
1.林老师教我们阅读和听力.
2.我给我的同学一本词典.
3.我们常常问老师问题.
4.明天旅行团参观上海坐飞机去. 明天旅行团坐飞机去上海参观。
5.我常常回答老师的问题.
6.每天伊戈尔去阅览室做作业.
7.她不常用电脑给朋友写信.
8.你是谁老师的? Не понимаю, что ты хочешь сказать?
对不对?
1.林老师教我们阅读和听力. （good）
2.我给我的同学一本词典. （OK） what I'd advice is that......You'd better show the tense in your sentence. Like 我给了我的同学一本词典（past），我将会给我的同学一本字典（future），我已经把字典给我同学了（past perfect）
3.我们常常问老师问题. （great）
4.明天旅行团参观上海坐飞机去. （modifier-position error)modifers should always be in front of the content that they modify. 坐飞机去, is a method of how to get shanghai, so it is the modifier of 去上海，so you should put it in front of 去上海。And if you want to express that " you go there with a package tour, you'd better add a 跟, which means "follow", to your sentence. 明天我跟旅行团坐飞机去上海参观／明天我跟旅行团坐飞机去参观上海。
5.我常常回答老师的问题. （good）
6.每天伊戈尔去阅览室做作业. （OK）It's already a correct sentence, and there are several ways to make some little improvements. 1. add a punctuation. 每天，......；2.伊戈尔每天去阅览室做作业。
7.她不常用电脑给朋友写信. （good）
8.你是谁老师的?( hard to understand) 你的老师是谁（who is your teacher) or 你是哪个谁的学生 (whose student are you)?
What you wrote is mostly right! What should be improved is tense and modifier-position~Come on!
