Ancient Egypt

Well, I'm a history lover, and I'm fascinated with ancient Egypt. As so many other ancient civilizations, Egypt started out as small groups of people on the banks of the Nile, the second biggest river in the world. Then those small groups, each with its own leader, soon became one big group with one leader - the pharaoh, <em>the figure of the government and God together</em> [It's unclear what you mean here. Do you mean a political and religious figure?]. But how they organized everything is what is really enchanting because everything about them was monumental - the pyramids, the temples, the lighthouse, and, of course, <em>the names behind everything </em>[Do you mean the names they gave to their cities and structures?].

Ancient Egypt

Well, I'm a history lover and I'm fascinated about ancient Egypt. As so many other ancient civilizations, Egypt started out as small groups of people on the banks of the Nile, the second biggest river in the world. Then those small groups,  each with a leader, soon became one big group with one leader - the pharaoh - the figure of the government and God together. But how they organized everything is what is really enchanting, because everything about them was monumental - the pyramids, the temples, the lightouse and, of course, the names behind everything.

Ancient Egypt

Well, I'm a history lover and I'm fascinated about ancient Egypt. As so many other ancient civilizations, Egypt started out as small groups of people in the banks of the Nile, the second biggest river in the world. Then those small groups, with a leader each, soon became one big group with only one leader - the pharaoh - the figure of the government and God together. But how they organized everything is what is really enchanting, because everything about them was monumental - the pyramids, the temples, the lightouse and, of course, the names behind everything.

Ancient Egypt

Well, I'm a history lover and I'm fascinated about ancient Egypt. As so many other ancient civilizations, Egypt started out as small groups of people in the banks of the Nile, the second biggest river in the world. Then those small groups, with one leader each, soon became one big group with one leader - the pharaoh - the figure of the government and God together. But how they organized everything is what is really enchanting, because everything about them was monumental - the pyramids, the temples, the lightouse and, of course, the names behind everything.