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According to statistics television is an inescapable part of modern culture. We depend on TV for entertainment, news, education, culture, weather, sport and music. Even though TV has a bad influence on peoples behavior, it helps companies to increase their sales. It informs people about news and entertains people with sports and music programs. First, let's consider how companies use the influence of TV, which is a successful media for advertisement. TV ads are very important they can greatly help any organization to tell people about their goods and services. As a result when companies start advertising on TV, their sales increase remarkably because it is a wholesale media watched by a lot of people. For Instance, L’Oreal Paris chooses the evening to present their ads, because it is a perfect hour to catch the target attention. Another example, is when old people watch TV and they watch an ad with a promo, they hurry up to buy the product. Furthermore, companies use informative advertising to give information about new types of products, the purpose is to increase demand for the new product. For instance, cell phones are a good example. The first sellers of these products had to tell consumers about the quality and convenience of the new product. Big sales soon follow. Also, some ads have included emotional moments in which users can relate to their products, such as, Mennen product and pampers, they persuade people to buy their products. In addition, new companies use a TV to announce it; their objective is to keep strong relationships with customers and to keep them thinking about the company. Second, people who are yearning to keep up with the news, use TV to be informed. That should suggest that people are interested in finding out what is happening in their world. This may also explain a need for a sense of connection, yet it might also suggest curiosity or a need for novelty. For instance, people enjoy time watching the news, because they want to be informed about what is happening around the world, also they need to be alert in case of natural disasters, shown in the news. Someone else may enjoy their time watching showbiz, they like to be aware of what the stars are doing. For example every year people enjoy watching programs, such as Miss Universe, the Oscars and Grammy’s, which make them relax. On the other hand, other people prefer watching Cultural and entertainment channels, such as, Discovery Chanel or Home and Health. In conclusion, TV influences not only for bad behavior, it has advantages and disadvantages, for companies and people, and they can choose the best option that provides to its viewers. Also, people can enjoy their free time watching different programs such as sports, cultural, scientific and the news.

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According to statistics television is an inescapable part of modern culture. We depend on TV for entertainment, news, education, culture, weather, sport and music. Even though TV has a bad influence on people behavior, it helps companies to increase their sales. It informs people about news and entertains people with sport and music programs. First, let's consider how companies used the influence of TV, which is a successful media of advertisement, TV ads is very important. It can greatly help any organization to tell people about its goods and services. As a result when companies start advertising on TV, their sales increase markedly because it is a wholesale media watched by a lot of people. For Instance, L’Oreal Paris chooses night to present their ad, because it is a perfect hour to catch the target attention. Another example, when old people watch TV and they watch an ad with a promo, they hurry up to buy the product. Furthermore, companies use informative advertising to give information about new type of product, the purpose is to increase demand for the new product. For instance, cell phones are a good example. The first sellers of these products had to tell consumers about the quality and convenience of the new product. Big sales soon follow. Also, some ads have included emotional moments, which as relations with their product, such as, Mennen product and pampers, they persuade people to buy their products. In addition, new companies used a TV to announce it; their objective is to keep strong relationship with costumers and to keep them thinking about the company. Second, people who yearning to keep up with the news, use TV to be informed. That should suggest that people are interested in finding out what is happening in their world. That might be explained by a need for a sense of connection, but it might also suggest curiosity or a need for novelty. For instance, people enjoy time watching news, because they want to be informed about what is happening around the world, also they need to be alert in case of natural disasters, shown in news . Someone else enjoy their time watching showbiz, they like be aware about what stars are doing. For example every year people enjoy watching programs, such as Miss Universe, the Oscars and Grammy’s. Which make them relax? On the other hand, other people prefer watching Cultural and entertainments channels, such as, Discovery Chanel or Home and Health. In conclusion, TV influences not only for a bad behavior, it has advantages and disadvantages, for companies and people, and they can choose the best option that provides to viewers. Also, people can enjoy their free time in different programs such as. Sport, cultural, scientific and news.

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