My breakfast
Today is a sunny day. [1] I have had [2] breakfast for at eight [3] o 'clock. Today's breakfast is was 嵌糕Wenling, it's my favorite food!Have It has noodles, celery, potatoes and carrots in the a rice cake.
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[1] You have started a new topic, therefore you should start a new sentence.
[2] You had breakfast this morning, which requires using the past tense.
[3] Writing "eight o'clock" is actually the correct grammar, not "8 o'clock". Well done!
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I have corrected two of your Notebook entries, and each time it has made me feel hungry. The photos you include show delicious-looking food!