A good book
During the last three days, I finished a novel including three books named " Hello, old days". It mainly told a girl from its child to its adult before she went to university. Through this period, she met a lot of passer-by and a very important person in her life. In kindergarden, a cute boy came across her and loved her. And then she happend to the boy in the primary school, and they became good friends. But there was some misunderstandings between them, so they haven't talked to each other from Grade 3. Then they went to different middle school and haven't met for three year. And forturnatly they got to the same high schoolh which was the best in their city. So gradually the misunderstandings were solved and they helped each other to study. Their grades are very good in scholl, and they got to the same universty and became lovers. Of there were many flexural stories between them, and I admire very much.
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A good book
During the last three days, I finished a novel named " Hello, old days". It mainly told of a girl from her childhood to her adulthood before she went to university. Through this period, she met a lot of passers-by* and a very important person in her life. In kindergarden, a cute boy came across her and fell in love with her. And then she happened to meet him in the primary school, and they became good friends. But there were some misunderstandings between them, so they didn't talk to each other from Grade 3. Then they went to different middle schools and didn't meet for three years. And fortunately they went to the same high school which was the best in their city. So gradually the misunderstandings were solved and they helped each other to study. Their grades are very good in school, and they went to the same university and became lovers. Also there were many incidental? stories between them that I liked very much.*or, people
Very well written!
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请用中文告诉我" Of there were many flexural stories between them, and I admire very much". 什么意思。Then I will be happy to try a correction.
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My English is pretty poor,lol, but I would like to revise your writing here. below is your story.
During the last three days, I have finished a novel with three books , which is named as ' Hello, old days'. The novel tells a story about a girl from her childhood to teenage when she meets many guys and eventually finds the Mr. Right. At kindergarten, a cute boy falls love with her(haha, too early to say love),then they become friends in primary school when some misunderstanding happen to both of them, so They take apart from Grade 3 until they get together at a high school which is the best high school at their city. They gradually build there trust , friendship and help each other in study.
Their study performance is always good during high school , which make them go to the same well-known university and be a pair of lover. In university,
there are so many flexural stories ahead, and you will love these books
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