Hi everyone. My name's name is Marco and I'm I am 24 years old. I'm I am Italian and I live in Cremona, in the north of Italy. I want learn English, Spanish and French language for in order to receive a tourist diploma, and also for travelling traveling. I like sports, nature, traveling and sailing! My hobby is videomaking. I'm tall and thin. I have blonde hair and blue eyes.

-- Marco,

It was very nice to get to know you. Aside from some slight errors, your entry was very good. My corrections are more like suggestions for formal writing. The contractions you used (name's, I'm) are more useful when spoken in a relaxed setting.

Keep up the great work!

Rebecca Green-Parkinson