Pepper
Bogoshorts Today I went to a place in Bogotá called Cine Tonalá, there was a festival of short films called Bogoshorts. Was raining and arrived late for this weather. About 22 hours, could get in to a short film that was nominated in the Oscar awards, was about a babie with a strange disease preventing him to breath while he sleep and therefore require mechanical ventilation for life.
29 de jan de 2015 07:27
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Bogoshorts

Today I went to a place in Bogotá called Cine Tonalá, there was a festival of short films called Bogoshorts. It was raining and I arrived late for this because of the\due to the weather. About 22 hours, could get in to a short film that was nominated in the  for an Oscar awards, it was about a babie baby with a strange disease preventing him to from breathing while he sleep slept and therefore required mechanical ventilation for life.

 

Hi Pepper, I am not sure what you wanted to say in the yellow highlight. 

The film "About 22 hours" is a short film that could be nominated for an Oscar.

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The film "About 22 hours" is a short film that was nominated for an Oscar.

 

Buen trabajo!

29 de janeiro de 2015

Here is how I would write it!

Today I went to a place in Bogotá, called Cine Tonalá, where there was a festival of short flms called "Bogoshorts." I was delayed because of the rain. "About 22 Hours" is a short film that was nominated for an Oscar. It's about a baby with a strange disease which prevents him from breathing while sleeping, and causes him to require medical ventilation for life.

19 de junho de 2015
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