An essay about should teenagers help at home

Nowadays many teenagers help with housework overall in families whose parents are divorcied and they have to go to work.

For sure sharing housework do life easier to parents and teaching to young to be more independient at the same time.

Due to economic downturn many mothers have had to start a job, that means they do not have much time to do housework so that need younger's help.

Althought the result of housework done by the youngers it is not the same than housework done by parents because of they do not have too much experience, it is exencial the help from them even it is likely that some tasks they can do better than their parents using all sort of gadgets which parents do not know how to use its.

To my mind in many families, housework are being shared yet and this situation it makes that the teenegers are more independients. Furthermore parents have much more time to rest.

Hi Alejandro - well done on your essay, there are some very interesting points about modern life.

Please see below my corrections and let me know if you have any questions. 1 easy thing to remember is that there is no such word in English as "The Younger/s". We might say "the youth" or "the teenager" or "the adolescent" instead.

Good luck with learning more English, and do take a look at my teacher profile if you are ever looking for lessons.

Tom

An essay about whether or not should teenagers should help at home.

Nowadays, many teenagers help with housework overall in families whose parents are divorced and they have to go to work.

For sure Sharing housework definitely does make life easier to for parents and teaches the young to be more independient at the same time.

Due to the economic downturn, many mothers have had to start a job, that which means they do not have much time to do housework so that  and they therefore need the younger people's help.

Althought the result of housework done by the younger household members it is not the same than as housework done by parents, because of they do not have too as much experience. Their help is essential, the help from them and it is even likely that some tasks they can do better than their parents using all sort of gadgets which parents do not know how to use. its.

To my mind, in many families housework are is being shared yet and this situation it makes means that the teenegers are more independent. Furthermore, parents have much more time to rest.