diane
My three Parrots I have three parrots,their name are dabao,huihui and xiaocai. When i finish my work ,i always paly with them.they also like me.when i get home,they will say ho.. ho..to call me let them out of the cage.when i open the door of the cage,they fly out and stop on my fingers or my head.Dabao is the best one, outside he can recgnize me.
27 de fev de 2015 12:31
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My three Parrots

I have three parrots, their name are dabao,huihui and xiaocai. When I finish my work I always play with them, they like me. When I get home, they will say ho.. ho..to call me to let them out of the cage. When I open the door of the cage, they fly out and stop on my fingers or my head.Dabao is the best one, outside he can recognize me.

 

** I is  is Always capitalized when used alone. 

 

When starting a new sentence the fist letter of the first word in the sentence is always capitalized, and there should  always be a space after a puncuation of word. 

 

Your sentente structure and word use is very good!! 

27 de fevereiro de 2015
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