An article about jobs. It's my homework, please help me correct my mistakes. Thank you very much!
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One type of profession which can make full use of my abilities is the helping professions. To work in the helping professions, sharing and helping are primarily needed. A particular example of the helping professions is a math teacher. I am good at math, so I have the ability to share knowledge which I have learned. Besides, I am able to help others solve mathematical problems and show them some good approaches which can assist them in making progress. The most important ability I have is that I can use good examples to help others comprehend some confusing mathematical problems. I do well in sharing, helping and bringing up good examples, and I think these outstanding abilities can make me to be a good math teacher.
