Ronan Holland
苹果手机五C 今天我去超市,因为我想苹果五C,因为我要为的工作。我很喜欢苹果东西。 I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.
6 de mar de 2015 23:04
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苹果手机五C

今天我去超市,因为我买个苹果五C,[Correcting as per your English] 因为用於为的工作 [Correcting without changing your original structure, this is classical Chinese style.  For a more colloquial style, it would "因為工作上要用]。我很喜欢苹果产品东西

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

7 de março de 2015
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苹果手机五C

今天我去超市,因为我想买了一个苹果五C,因为我要为的工作需要。我很喜欢苹果东西的产品

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

6 de março de 2015

苹果手机五C

今天我去超市了,我想苹果五C,因为工作需要。我很喜欢苹果公司的产品。

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

7 de março de 2015
因为我的工作需要,所以今天我去超市买了Iphone 5C, 我很喜欢苹果的产品.
7 de março de 2015

苹果手机五C

今天我去超市,因为我想买了苹果五C,因为我要为的工作需要手机。我很喜欢苹果东西的产品

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

7 de março de 2015
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