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My Mother. Today I would want to tell about my mother. First of all, she is my closest friend and I am really happy person to have understood it in so little age. Sometimes, having lived all life, people don’t realize that their parents are the greatest people in their life. In the beginning, I didn’t understand it too but when my friends let my down and I stood alone, they were the single people who loved and accepted me as I am. Then I realized the most important thing in my life – I must take care of my family, love them and protect them as they do. So, my little family consists only from 4 members. The head of it is my mother. Also it concludes my granny and two older brothers. They are adults already. I am youngest in my family. As I already said, my mother is the main person because she provides us with food, clothes and she pays for all our expenses. That is why she must work almost every day. And it is the saddest thing in my life because my mum deserves better life. Because of her hard work she lost much weight and now she looks tortured. Sometimes she gets after me without any reason but still I understand that I don’t have to be rude towards her and I keep silent. So that she works I see her once in a blue moon. I miss her very much! Therefore, sometimes I feel lonely and get rude towards another people. She works a lot but still she has free time. In her free time she likes creating something new. I think she is the genius! For example, she can make a thing she has seen only one time. Thus, she created entire series of handmade bags. What’s more, she is very intelligent woman. She reads a lot and recommends me some books to read. I suppose I inherited my reading interest from her. Also she is a very kind person but she considers herself to be misanthrope. I noticed that exactly kind people became misanthropic. They must get over their kindness to survive in our society. People always use people as my mum is to get their own benefit. Do you think so? I do. She helps people in need, she survives abandoned animals and provides them with food and shelter and medical treatment. I think she is the kinder than most people around the world. By the way, she is very pretty, she has traditional Russian appearance: big blue eyes, blond hair, regular features. I wish I were her! I am not so pretty. I can discride her forever, but I have to stop because my signs are all used. I would be glad to get correction from you. Bye.
15 de abr de 2015 19:21
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My Mother.

Today I would want to tell like to write about my mother. First of all, she is my closest friend and I am a really happy person to have understood it in so little age while I was pretty young. Sometimes, having lived all life, people don’t realize that their parents are the greatest people in their life. In the beginning Before, I didn’t understand it too but when my friends let my me down and I stood alone, they were the single only people who loved and accepted me as I am. Then I realized the most important thing in my life – I must take care of my family, love them and protect them as they do. So, my little family consists only from 4 members. The head of it is my mother. Also it concludes includes my granny and two older brothers. They are adults already. I am the youngest in my family. As I already said, my mother is the main person because she provides us with food, clothes and she pays for all our expenses. That is why she must work almost every day. And it is the saddest thing in my life because my mum deserves better life. Because of her hard work she lost much weight and now she looks tortured. Sometimes she gets after me without any reason but still I understand that I don’t have to be rude towards her and I keep silent. So that because she works I see her once in a blue moon. I miss her very much! Therefore, sometimes I feel lonely and get rude towards another people someone else. She works a lot, but still she has free time. In her free time she likes creating something new. I think she is the genius! For example, she can make a thing she has seen only one time. Thus, she created entire series of handmade bags. What’s more, she is very intelligent woman. She reads a lot and recommends me some books to read. I suppose I inherited my reading interests from her. Also she is a very kind person but she considers herself to be misanthrope. I noticed that exactly those kind of people became misanthropic. They must get over their kindness to survive in our society. People always use exploit other people  just as they do my mum is so to get their own benefit. Do you think so? I do. She helps people in need, she survives abandoned animals and provides them with food and shelter and medical treatment. I think she is the kinder than most of the people around the world. By the way, she is very pretty, she has traditional Russian appearance: big blue eyes, blond hair, regular features. I wish I were her! I am not so pretty. I can discride could write about her forever a lot more, but I have to stop because my signs are all used. I would be glad to get correction from you. Bye.

 

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15 de abril de 2015

My Mother.

Today I would wantlike to tellwrite about my mother. First of all, she is my closest friend and I am a really happy person to have understood it in so little that at such a young age. Sometimes, having lived all their lifes, people don’t realize that their parents are the greatest people in their life. InAt the beginning, I didn’t understand it tooeither but when my friends let myme down and I stood alone, they were the single people who loved and accepted me as I am. Then I realized the most important thing in my life – I must take care of my family, love them and protect them as they do to me. So, my little family consists only fromof only 4 members. The head of it is my mother. Also it concludesincludes my granny and two older brothers. They are already adults already. I am youngest in my family. As I already said, my mother is the main person because she provides us with food, clothes and she pays for all our expenses. That is why she must work almost every day. And it is the saddest thing in my life because my mum deserves a better life. Because of her hard work she has lost much weight and now she looks tortured. Sometimes she gets after me without any reason but still I understand that I don’t have to be rude towards her and I keep silent. So thatBecause she works so often I only get to see her once in a blue moon. I miss her very much! Therefore, sometimes I feel lonely and get rude towards another people. She works a lot but still she has free time. In her free time she likes creating something new. I think she is thea genius! For example, she can make a something she has seen only one timeonce. Thus, she created an entire series of handmade bags. What’s more, she is a very intelligent woman. She reads a lot and recommends me some books to read. I suppose I inherited my reading interest from her. Also she is a very kind person but she considers herself to be misanthropeic. I noticed that exactlyonly kind people became misanthropic. They must get over their kindness to survive in our society. People always use people such as my mum is to get their own benefit. Do you think so? I do. She helps people in need, she survivesprotects abandoned animals and provides them with food and shelter and medical treatment. I think she is the kinder than most people around the world. By the way, she is very pretty, she has the traditional Russian appearance: big blue eyes, blonde hair,and regular features. I wish I were her! I am not so pretty. I can discridecould describe her forever, but I have to stop because my signsideas are all used up. I would be glad to get a correction from you. Goodbye.

16 de abril de 2015

My Mother.

Today I would want to tell talk about my mother. First of all, she is my closest friend and I am really happy person to have understood it in so little age at such a young age. Sometimes, having lived all their whole life, people don’t realize that their parents are the greatest people in their life. In the beginning At first, I didn’t understand it too either, but when my friends let my me down and I stood alone, they were the single only people who loved and accepted me as I am. Then I realized the most important thing in my life – I must take care of my family, love them and protect them as they do for me. So, my little family consists only from of only 4 members. The head of it is my mother. Also it concludes It also includes my granny and two older brothers, who are adults already. I am the youngest in my family. As I already said, my mother is the main person because she provides us with food, clothes, and she pays for all our expenses. That is why she must work almost every day, and it is the saddest thing in my life because my mum deserves a better life. Because of her hard work she lost much a lot of weight and now she looks tortured. Sometimes she gets comes after me without any reason, but still I understand that I don’t have to be rude towards her and I keep silent. So that Since she works, I see her once in a blue moon. I miss her very much! Therefore, I sometimes feel lonely and get be rude towards another people person. She works a lot but still she has free time. In her free time she likes creating something new to create new things. I think she is the a genius! For example, she can make a thing something that she has seen only one time once. Thus, she created an entire series of handmade bags. What’s more, she is a very intelligent woman. She reads a lot and recommends me some books to read. I suppose I inherited my reading interest interest in reading from her. Also she is She is also a very kind person but she considers herself to be a misanthrope. I noticed that exactly those kind people became become misanthropic. They must get over their kindness to survive in our society. People always use people such as my mum is to get their own benefit. Do you think so? I do. She helps people in need, she survives helps abandoned animals to survive and provides them with food, and shelter and medical treatment. I think she is the kinder than most people around the world. By the way, she is very pretty, she has a traditional Russian appearance: big blue eyes, blond hair, regular features. I wish I were her! I am not so pretty. I can discribe her forever, but I have to stop because my signs are all used I have reached the character limit. I would be glad to get recieve a correction from you. Bye.

16 de abril de 2015
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