Hector
Today is a day to run I'm preparing me for go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends love run, always go together. When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.
5 de mai de 2015 00:18
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Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me for  to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy.   Me and my friends love run, always go together. 


When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.

5 de maio de 2015
1

Today is a day to run

I'm preparing to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love it when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Me and my friends love to run, we always go together.

When the sun goes down it's the perfect moment to go out.

5 de maio de 2015
1

Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me myself for go out to to go for a run. I usually run three or four times every a week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends My friends and I love to run, and we always go together.

When the sun goes down, that is the perfect moment to go out.

5 de maio de 2015
1

Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me for to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, because  I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends My friends and I love to run, we always go together.

When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.

Better: The perfect moment to go out is when the sun goes down.

5 de maio de 2015
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