Alinne Moraes
About The USA during my vacation Good afternoon, friends! I'm back to Brazil, after about twenty days in The USA. I met Orlando, Miami and New York. Orlando is incredible, The themes parks are fantastics and I felt like a child again. The malls are a dream, I bought many things for me. Miami is a paradise, the beachs, malls, peoples, foods, Supermarkets, roads, everything... I met Hollywood, Fortlauderdale, Miami Beach, Downtown and Keybiscayne. In the last days of my vacation, I went to New York. I loved USA. See you soon.
24 de mai de 2015 17:34
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About The USA during my vacation

Good afternoon, friends!

I'm back in to Brazil, after about twenty days in the USA. I visited met Orlando, Miami and New York.
Orlando is incredible., The themes parks are fantastics and I felt like a child again. The malls are a dream, I bought many things for myself me.
Miami is a paradise, the beaches, malls, peoples, foods, supermarkets, roads, everything... I met went to Hollywood, Fort Lauderdale, Miami Beach, Downtown and Keybiscayne.
In the last days of my vacation, I went to New York.
I loved the  USA.

See you soon.

24 de maio de 2015

About The USA during my vacation

Good afternoon, friends!

I'm back to Brazil, after about twenty days in the USA. I met visited Orlando, Miami and New York.
Orlando is incredible. The themes parks are fantastics and I felt like a child again. The malls are a dream.   I bought many things for me myself.
Miami is a paradise.  The beaches, malls, peoples, foods, Supermarkets, roads, everything... I met visited Hollywood, Fort Lauderdale, Miami Beach, Downtown and Key Biscayne.
In the last days of my vacation which I went to spent in New York.
I loved USA.

See you soon.

 

It sounds like you had a great vacation! 

24 de maio de 2015
Yes, I do! I used "met" but I change for "visited". Thank you for your correction!
20 de junho de 2015
I'm guessing you were using Conhecer when you were talking about the places like in the sentences - I met Orlando. In English you would just say I went to Orlando, etc. I took some time for me to get used to when learning Conhecer in Portuguese.
9 de junho de 2015
No. You're wrong. I worked hard during my life and realized my dream.
24 de maio de 2015
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