youta Kawanishi
introduction hello everyone. I'm youta Kawanishi. I was born and had lived in Yokohama for graduated high school. Now, I live in tokyou. I have learned English since when I was junior high school student but when I compare now and I was 12, I think my English skill doesn't change. I want to improve my English skill and tell each other about native language. nice to meet you. thank you for reading.
1 de jul de 2015 06:34
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introduction

Hello everyone.
I'm Youta Kawanishi.
I was born and had lived raised in Yokohama, for which is where I graduated high school.
Now, I live in Tokyo.
I have learned English since when I was started learning English in junior high school student but when I compared to then and now and I was 12, I think my English skill doesn't hasn't changed.
I want to improve my English skills and tell talk to each other about our native languages.
Nice to meet you. Thank you for reading.

1 de julho de 2015

Ryan's corrections are generally good but this sentence is problematic:

"I have learned English since when I was junior high school student but when I compare now and I was 12, I think my English skill doesn't change." 

The correction "I have learned English since I was a junior high school student but when I compare myself now to when I was 12, I don't think my English skills have changed" is both a run-on sentence and has verb problems ("have learned" doesn't make sense). Better alternatives are:  
- I have been learning English since I was a junior highschool student. However, when I compare myself now to when I was 12, I don't think my English skills have changed. 

- I have been learning English since I was a junior highschool student. However, I don't think my English skills have greatly improved since then.

- While I have been learning English since I was a junior highschool student, I don't think my English skills have greatly improved over the past 10 years. 

1 de julho de 2015

Introduction

Hello, everyone.
I'm Youta Kawanishi.
I was born in Yokohama and lived there until I graduated from high school.
Now, I live in Tokyo.
I have learned English since I was a junior high school student but when I compare myself now to when I was 12, I don't think my English skills have changed. 
I want to improve my English skills and tell each other about our native languages.
Nice to meet you. Thank you for reading.

1 de julho de 2015
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