Cartagena

Last week I travelled to Cartegena.

It was a beautiful trip where I visited the city in the day and saw the dancers at night.

I also visited 'Islas del Rosario'. The water in the sea was awesome and I could see the fishes swimming around me.

I hope to return to Cartanega next year for my honeymoon unless I find another wonderful place.

Now my holiday is finshed, I am going back to work.

Good effort! This is my first correction / help for a fellow italki so I hope that it is useful!

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Cartagena

The Last week, I traveled to Cartagena.
It was a beautiful trip. I visited the city in the day and I saw the dancers at night.
Also I visited Islas del Rosario, where the sea water is awesome. I could see the fishes swimming around me.
I hope to come back to Cartagena the next year for my honeymoon or maybe I will find another wonderful place.
Now I have finished my vacations and I am back to work.

[Good job.  The first day back at work after a good vacation is always the hardest.]