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刘海哥 Character descriptions 刘海哥 Character descriptions 我的水平很不好的,所以我不听懂汉语电视剧目。 但是我有的时候看一部节目、刘海哥。剧情很简单的。 我向你介绍人物。 男主人公是刘海哥。他很好人。素朴,诚实,和善,喜色,而且谦。 除了刘海哥另外女人物。杜鹃 喜欢刘海哥。她清纯。因为她没有自信所以常常紧张。虽然她很漂亮,但是她没有聪明。她常常尴尬,脆弱,焦虑。她有时候悲。 女主人公是人物叫九妹. 她是狐仙,九尾狐。她也喜欢刘海哥。她非常漂亮,而且她有法术。她劲,聪明。 林东升 (林大人)是贪官, 坏人,他有钱,他虚伪,常常傻。 我喜欢那么轻,喜色的电视剧目。我觉得这个剧目是一传统故事。 My level isn't very good so I can’t understand Chinese TV series. However sometimes I watch a series called Liú Hǎi Gē. The storyline is very simple. I want to introduce some of the characters. The main character is Liú Hǎi Gē. He is good. Simple, honest, kind, cheerful and modest. Apart from Liú Hǎi Gē there are several female characters. Dù Juān likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is pure and innocent. Because she doesn’t have self confidence she is often nervous. Although she is very pretty she is not very clever. She is often embarrassed, fragile, anxious. Sometimes she is sad. The female main character is Jiǔ Mèi. She is a fox spirit, a nine tailed fox spirit. Se also likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is very pretty, and also has magic powers. She is strong and intelligent. Lín dōng shēng (Lín Dà Rén ) is a corrupt official. He is bad, rich, false and often stupid. I like this gentle and cheerful series. I believe it is a traditional story. --------------------------- The aim of the text is to practice adjectives for people. Not to explain the TV series.
12 de out de 2015 05:53
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刘海哥 Character descriptions(人物描述)
 
我的水平很不好的,所以我不听懂汉语电视剧目。

我的水平不太好/不是很好,所以我听不懂/看不懂汉语电视剧。

很不好的 sounds odd. 不听懂 is incorrect.


但是我有的时候看一部节目,(叫)刘海哥。

但是/然而,我有时候会看一部叫刘海哥的电视剧。会 is making this sentence more natural.

(它的)剧情很简单

Deleting 的 sounds better and more succinct.
向你介绍一些(电视剧里的)人物。

Just to be consistent with your English version. And adding 想 makes it more natural, because directly say 我向你介绍 sounds mandatory.
男主人公是刘海哥。

很好人。(incorrect). Should be 他是很好的人/他人很好/他是好人。

素朴,诚实,和善,喜色,而且谦虚/谦逊 I was wondering what cheerful means in English when it is used to describe characters. If it means optimistic, it should be 乐观. If it means making people happy, it should be 令人愉快.
除了刘海哥,还有其他/另外几个另外人物。杜鹃 喜欢刘海哥。她清纯/她天真(innocent)而纯洁(pure)。

清纯 is very good, just want to offer some other alternatives.

(因为)她没有自信,所以常常紧张。虽然她很漂亮,但是她没有聪明。not very clever 不是很聪明

她常常感到尴尬,脆弱,焦虑。她有时候感到悲伤。

I am thinking why "she is often embarrassed". Does that mean "she is often embarrased by other things" or just "she tends to feel embarassed"? (Sorry that I don't reallly know "embarrased" can be used to describe a person's character in English. Could you explain it a little bit?)

感到悲伤 sounds better than 她有时候悲伤(it sounds incomplete.)


女主人公是/人物叫九妹. 她是狐仙,九尾狐。她也喜欢刘海哥。她非常漂亮,而且她有法术。她强大,聪明。 /她强大而聪明。

Another translation of strong is 强壮, but is more often to describe men.
林东升 (林大人)是贪官, 坏人,他有钱,他虚伪,常常(很/比较)傻。 常常傻 sounds incomplete, but 常常做傻事 is fine.
我喜欢那么轻,喜色的电视剧目我喜欢这个温和(gentle)而让人愉悦/开心(cheerful)的故事。

轻喜剧 means light comedy, which, I think, is not the same as "gentle and cheerful series".

我觉得这个剧目是一传统故事。 剧目 usually refers to an opera in theatre.

 

Very good practice! Very few gramatical mistakes. Just pay more attention to the use of 想/会 which may make your sentences sound more natural, and also whether to add 的 after an adjective. I learn a lot from the English text too.


My level isn't very good so I can’t understand Chinese TV series. However sometimes I watch a series called Liú Hǎi Gē. The storyline is very simple.
I want to introduce some of the characters.
The main character is Liú Hǎi Gē. He is good. Simple, honest, kind, cheerful and modest.
Apart from Liú Hǎi Gē there are several female characters. Dù Juān likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is pure and innocent. Because she doesn’t have self confidence she is often nervous. Although she is very pretty she is not very clever. She is often embarrassed, fragile, anxious. Sometimes she is sad.
The female main character is Jiǔ Mèi. She is a fox spirit, a nine tailed fox spirit. Se also likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is very pretty, and also has magic powers. She is strong and intelligent.
Lín dōng shēng (Lín Dà Rén ) is a corrupt official. He is bad, rich, false and often stupid.
I like this gentle and cheerful series. I believe it is a traditional story.

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The aim of the text is to practice adjectives for people. Not to explain the TV series.

24 de outubro de 2015

刘海哥 Character descriptions 

我的中文水平沒有那麼的好,所以我听<em></em>懂汉语电视剧(和節目)。
但是我有的时候看一部电视剧,"刘海哥"。剧情很简单(的)。
我向你介绍(剧中)人物
男主人公(/男主角)是刘海哥。他<em></em>很好素朴(/樸實)诚实(/正直, 真誠)和善喜色(/樂觀),而且谦
除了刘海哥另外還有幾個配角其中一個叫杜鹃喜欢刘海哥。她清纯(而天真),但因她没有自信所以常常(表現出)紧张。虽然她很漂亮,但是她並不聪明。她常常處於尴尬脆弱焦虑的狀態。她有时候會感到悲傷
女主人公(/女主角)是叫九妹的<em>人物</em>。她是狐仙,(一隻)九尾狐。她也喜欢刘海哥。她非常(的)漂亮,而且*有法术。她堅強又聪明。 (她能力很強,又兼具才智。)(*You might omit some of the same subjects.)
林东升 (林大人)是贪官、坏人。他有钱,他虚伪,且經幹蠢
我喜欢這種轻喜剧的电视目。我想它一個传统故事。 (我觉得这齣戲是在描述传统的民間故事。)

My level isn't very good so I can’t understand Chinese TV series. However sometimes I watch a series called Liú Hǎi Gē. The storyline is very simple.
I want to introduce some of the characters.
The main character is Liú Hǎi Gē. He is good. Simple, honest, kind, cheerful and modest.
Apart from Liú Hǎi Gē there are several female characters. Dù Juān likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is pure and innocent. Because she doesn’t have self confidence she is often nervous. Although she is very pretty she is not very clever. She is often embarrassed, fragile, anxious. Sometimes she is sad.
The female main character is Jiǔ Mèi. She is a fox spirit, a nine tailed fox spirit. Se also likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is very pretty, and also has magic powers. She is strong and intelligent.
Lín dōng shēng (Lín Dà Rén ) is a corrupt official. He is bad, rich, false and often stupid.
I like this gentle and cheerful series. I believe it is a traditional story.

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The aim of the text is to practice adjectives for people. Not to explain the TV series.

12 de outubro de 2015

刘海哥 Character descriptions

刘海哥 Character descriptions

我的水平很不好的,所以我不听懂(我听不懂)汉语电视剧目。 (节目
但是我有的时候看一部节目(电视剧):《刘海哥。剧情很简单的。
我向你介绍人物。
男主人公是刘海哥。他很好人(人很好)。素朴,诚实,和善,喜色,而且谦(谦虚)。
除了刘海哥之外还有几个人物女主角)。杜鹃喜欢刘海哥。她清纯。因为她没有自信所以常常紧张。虽然她很漂亮,但是她没有聪明不够聪明)。她常常尴尬,脆弱,焦虑。她有时候很悲伤)。
女主人公是人物叫九妹. 她是狐仙,九尾狐。她也喜欢刘海哥。她非常漂亮,而且她有法术。她坚强),聪明。
林东升 (林大人)是贪官, 坏人,他有钱,他虚伪,常常傻很傻)。
我喜欢那么轻,喜色这部文艺又开心)的电视剧。我觉得这)剧是一()传统故事。

My level isn't very good so I can’t understand Chinese TV series. However sometimes I watch a series called Liú Hǎi Gē. The storyline is very simple.
I want to introduce some of the characters.
The main character is Liú Hǎi Gē. He is good. Simple, honest, kind, cheerful and modest.
Apart from Liú Hǎi Gē there are several female characters. Dù Juān likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is pure and innocent. Because she doesn’t have self confidence she is often nervous. Although she is very pretty she is not very clever. She is often embarrassed, fragile, anxious. Sometimes she is sad.
The female main character is Jiǔ Mèi. She is a fox spirit, a nine tailed fox spirit. Se also likes Liú Hǎi Gē. She is very pretty, and also has magic powers. She is strong and intelligent.
Lín dōng shēng (Lín Dà Rén ) is a corrupt official. He is bad, rich, false and often stupid.
I like this gentle and cheerful series. I believe it is a traditional story.

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The aim of the text is to practice adjectives for people. Not to explain the TV series.

12 de outubro de 2015
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