Chinese Film

Hello, everyone. I will0* introduce to you to Chinese film’s 1* features of Chinese film.
First and foremost, as is well known, the Martial arts2* film is a unique type of film of China. S , such as Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon, it is was the first Chinese film that won the Oscar Award for best foreign language film.It makes people experience the fascination of3* Chinese martial arts, and it also embodies the4*Chinese traditional aesthetic culture.
In addition, there are Chinese traditional culture and distinctive national characteristics5* in Chinese film, t . Take Farewell My Concubine as an example, it employed the traditional Beijing opera elements 6* in the film. The film won the Golden Palm Award at Cannes International Flim Festival in 1993. As a result of perfect performance, the hero of this film Leslie Cheung got a wide range of international attention.The film shows the thinking of Chinese traditional culture and human nature. It is regarded as a new peak in Chinese film history.
What’s more, as we can see, Chinese movies2* reflects China’s real social life and the characteristics of the times, for instance, Livetimes living is based on the Chinese civil war and political movements since the new China was founded. It mirrored the cultural trend in thought at that stage.
As for Chinese film’s1* advantages, it there is no denying that the1* Chinese movie has made rapid progress in recent years. And it is rich in Chinese characteristics. People all over the world know more about Chinese traditional culture and a its long history through watching Chinese movies.

<em>0* Maybe more natural - I would like to introduce..- or - in this essay I will...</em>

<em>1* 's - is not always appropriate and is more used with people. Here 'features' are where the emphasis is placed, not Chinese film. </em>

<em>2* - to speak in general you can use 1. an uncountable (not in this case), 2. with 'The' or 3. in plural- Martial arts films.</em>

<em>3*- Do you really mean 'a fascination' or 'a fascinating aspect of'?</em>

<em>4* culture is usually uncountable and better without article. Here you are not comparing this culture with another one. eg. the culture in the North is different to the culture in the south.</em>

<em>5*- I would prefer- there are characteristics of Chinese culture and distinctive national characteristics.</em>

<em>or maybe an alternative like:</em>

<em>there are elements of Chinese culture...</em>

<em>6* I would have said - elements of traditional Beijing opera.</em>

<em>Although sometimes a bit unnatural the text is well written and you have explained clearly a lot of ideas. Lots of good expressions -take... as an example, a wide range of attention, regarded as a new peak, etc. - which make a good impression, and the cinema vocabulary is all excellent. The organisation is great and you make very good use of a nice variety of connecting expressions.</em>