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A few sentences. What are the mistakes ? I have just read an article from the website « lemonde.fr ». This article deals with the public transport in Ile-de-France, it means Paris and a large area around that is a crowded area. The main purpose of this article is that the Cour des Comptes in France, advocates fares’ increase. The reason of this recommendation is that the state of the public transport is not good due to a lack of investment.

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Here are a few sentences. What are the  Are there any mistakes ?

I have just read an article from the website « lemonde.fr ». This article deals with the public transport in Ile-de-France, it which  means Paris and a large area around (Paris or maybe the city) that which is a crowded area. part of the city. 

The main purpose subject of this article is that the Cour des Comptes in France, advocates fares’ increases. The reason of for this recommendation is that the state of the public transport is not good due to a lack of investment.


This is very good. Just a few grammar corrections. 

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