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A "funny" experience When I was 13 years old, my school organized a trip to England. At the time, I barely knew how to say "hello" or "thank you" properly, so I was dreading this trip, I didn't want to go, but I had to. We had to take the bus to Calais, then take the boat to England and it felt like an eternity, until we eventually reached our destination. I was very shy and unfortunately all my friends were very VERY loud and over-excited, and we just looked like a bunch of French fools running around in the streets of London. So me and my best friend Thomas were standing in front of this huge building, everything was so expensive looking, so I was really embarrased and my friend shouted "ON EST DES STARS" (which would approximatively translate into 'WE'RE SUPERSTARS") and he ran to the glass door, hit his head against it, and fell to the ground screaming, and I had to go check if he was okay.
24 de fev de 2016 03:08
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A "funny" experience

When I was 13 years old, my school organized a trip to England.
At the time, I barely knew how to say "hello" or "thank you" properly, so I was dreading this trip, I didn't want to go, but I had to.
We had to take the bus to Calais, then take the boat to England and it felt like an eternity, until we eventually reached our destination.
I was very shy and unfortunately all my friends were very VERY loud and over-excited, and we just looked like a bunch of French fools running around in the streets of London.

Some and my best friend Thomas and I were standing in front of this huge building, everything was so expensive looking, so and I was really embarrased and my friend shouted "ON EST DES STARS" (which would approximatively translate into 'WE'RE SUPERSTARS") and he ran to the glass door, hit his head against it, and fell to the ground screaming, and I had to go check if he was okay.

24 de fevereiro de 2016
thank you ! Maybe some parts could have been improved, maybe there is a more natural way to say some of the things I wrote, I don't know. If you do, let me know :)
24 de fevereiro de 2016
All looks good to me! good job!
24 de fevereiro de 2016
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