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March It is already March. March is spring according to the Japanese calender. But the cold wind is blowing still. On the way home, I found the cat and took a picture. The moment I released a shutter, the cat looked back. So, i was disapointed.

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March

It is already March.
March is spring according to the Japanese calender [calendar].
But the cold wind is still blowing still.
On the way home, I found the a cat and took a picture ['the' and 'a' are difficult. Here you want to use 'a cat' because it is the first time you refer to a cat (there are many cats). When you talk about the cat later, you use 'the cat' because it refers to that one cat].
The moment I released a the shutter, the cat looked back. [Here there is only one shutter for your camera, so you want to use 'the']
So, i was disapointed. [disappointed]
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March

It is already March.
March is spring, according to the Japanese calender.
But the cold wind is blowing still.
On the way home, I found the a cat and took a picture.
The moment I released the a shutter, the cat looked back away.
So, I was disappointed.

Aww! That is a cute cat.
Maybe you will see it again soon.

This was well written.

~Frazer.

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