Before heading out, Carol and Tobin sat together (they couldn't sleep). Tobin loves Carol's cookies and because of that he tells her that many people in the Community see her as a mother figure. She asks him if he agrees. Tobin disagrees and tells her that she is something else for him. Carol kisses him and it seems as if something which is only written in the stars could surface between them.
The had to take action at night. They (The Community?) trapped them with at Walker's head which one of the other Community members pretended (??) to be Cragories head. Rick, Michonne, Glenn, Abraham with others entered their (fort?) successfully. Inside they checked the doors and killed sleeping enemies. Glenn and another person were found in the armory. While they were there they were attacked. As they reached the room they closed the door and killed everyone outside in a closed shooting.
In the end it turns out that Neagon is alive and that no everyone is dead. They claimed to capture Carole and Meggy.
I couldn't fit all my corrections in one entry so this was the best I could do... great effort! A bit confusing since I don't watch the walking dead. Just be careful about mixing tenses as you describe the story line. Stick with either using the past or present tense. Also, watch using he, she or they too much. I can be difficulty to know who you're referring to with all the different characters. Keep up the good work. Let me know if you have any questions about any corrections.
The Walking Dead Season 6, Episode 12
Today I decided to summarize every TV series that I'm watching. If can stay motivated enough to keep on doing this, I think I'll be able to improve my written English while I can enjoy watching TV series.The Walking Dead is the probably best Zombie series out there. These are the highlights of Season 6, Episode 12:
Rick and the others have returned home. He wants everyone to gather at the Church in order to bring them up to date. Because of the food shortage, something has to be done. They have to fight Hilltop, thus (so that?) they can get food from their new found friends, the Jesus Community. Rick believes the best choice is to make a group decision. He want to decide what needs to be done by himself anymore. Morgan asks whether he thinks they can beat the Hilltop. Although (?) Rick says yes, he suggests that they should negotiate with them. It's obvious that he's still trying to prevent anyone from being killed. Rick's (Morgan's?) rebuttal (or reply) is that "we have to come for them before they come for us". Even though no one could change Morgan's (Rick?) mind, as a group they decide to attack the Hilltop at night.
