Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas) "Gaddafi Female Gorillas" is also called "Amazone Escort", they are all master soldier and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated

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Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas) "Gaddafi Female Gorillas" is also called "Amazone Escort", they are all master soldier and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated from female military acodemy in Tripoli. They protects Gaddafi for twenty-four hours all weather personal protection. They guarded Gaddafi whenever Gaddafi went our. On March 20, 2011. There were two group female gorillas members broke into the anti-government millitants headquarters 300 meters away by the civilian cars, sparking fierce clash with anti-government millitants. Thank you for your patience.

28 de mar de 2011 13:07

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In this article "Gorillas" should probably be "guerrillas". It's the Spanish word for "war combatants" but in English means something like rebel "soldiers". Hope that helps.

29 de março de 2011

Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas)

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On March 20, 2011. There were two groups of female gorillas members who broke into the anti-government millitant's headquarters 300 meters away by using (with) civilian cars, sparking a fierce clash with anti-government millitants.

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29 de março de 2011