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Wayne McGrath
僕の犬が死んでしまった I wrote this in response to a discussion thread but, I thought I should put it here too. モーガンさんの気持ちがよく分かります。僕の大好きな犬も先月に死んでしまった。犬の名前はジェッスでした。若い時からずっとヒップ異形成(Hip dysplasia) の病気があったのに、十年でちゃんと生きていました。今、寂しいし、悲しいけど、なんかジェッスの写真を見るとか、ジェッスのことについて考える時、笑ってしまいます。絶対に忘れません。さようならジェッス。 Morgan I really understand how you feel. My dog also passed away last month. Her name was Jess. She lived a full life for 10 years despite having Hip Dysplasia from a young age. Right now I'm sad and lonely but, somehow when I think about Jess or see I picture of her I can't help but smile. I'll never forget her. Goodbye Jess.
29 de jul de 2016 21:47
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モーガンさんの気持ちがよく分かります。僕の大好きだった犬も先月(に)死んでしまいました犬の名前はジェッスでした (maybe ジェス?)。若い時からずっとヒップ異形成(Hip dysplasia) の病気があったのに、十年(間)ちゃんと生き(てい)ました。今寂しいし、悲しいけど、なんかジェッスの写真を見たり、ジェッスのことについて考える[時 or と]、笑顔になります。絶対に忘れません。さようならジェッス。


If you are writing with です & ます, it's better to stick to it throughout your writing.

:)
29 de julho de 2016
ジェッス、安らかに。
30 de julho de 2016
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