Comics/essay ​Recently, reading comics become a famous hobby all over the world. Not only in Japan. I also really like to read comics, and I have 2000 comics in my shelves. I have 2000comics in my pho

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Comics/essay Recently, reading comics become a famous hobby all over the world. Not only in Japan. I also really like to read comics, and I have 2000 comics in my shelves. I have 2000comics in my phone too. So, I know a lot of attraction of comics. Reading comics can have positive reasons, and you should start to read comics as your hobby. Firstly, you will have no boring time. You can read comics whenever and wherever. Some hobbies are restricted from time and places. For example, if you want to choose skiing as your hobby, you cannot do it in your home. If you like to play instruments, you cannot do it during night. However, when you choose comics, you can do it in the morning, afternoon, evening, and night because reading comics is not noisy and not related with brightness of outside. Also, you can do it in a bus, a school, and home too because comics are light. You can carry comics without bothering. When you have time, just do it. Secondly, you can study from this hobby. You can learn and remember many words from comics. In addition, you don’t have to check them up because comics have situation and pictures. You can imagine how to use it words. Additionally, reader can have outstanding thinking by comics. Comics are not just reading words and seeing pictures. Lauren, Perry who wrote “6reasons You Need to Start Reading Comic Books Readers” said that readers sometimes need to think what a graphic page says, and it connects elevated thinking. Finally, comics are very fun! You can be anyone like hero, witch, and princess when you go into comics. You can go to anywhere too. You will also enjoy thinking what to be end. Besides, fun of comics is not only reading, but talking. After finish reading, you can recommend them friends, or you can search people who read same comics by internet. Then you can talk about the comics. You may hear different opinion and findings. In addition, fun of comics can make to like reading books. Writer of How Comics Helped My Kids Love Reading, Sierra Filucci said that her son really hated reading books, but now, he could understand fun of reading by comics.. Filucci, Sierra. How Comics Helped My Kid Love Reading. Common Sense, 2016, www.commonsensemedia.org/blog/how-comics-helped-my-kid-love-reading#. 7/14/2016 As you can see, comics are good at time, places, studying, and enjoying. I think that reading comics is best hobby, and I strongly want you to try to read comics. Comics will make your life happier.

8 de nov de 2016 13:19

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Comics/essay

Recently, reading comics (has) become a famous hobby all over the world. Not only in Japan. I also really like to read comics, and I have 2000 comics (on) my shelves. I have 2000 comics in my phone too. So, I know a lot (about the appeal of comics). Reading comics can have positive (effects), and you should start to read comics as your hobby.

Firstly, you (won't ever be bored). You can read comics whenever and wherever. Some hobbies are restricted (to) time and places. For example, if you want to choose skiing as your hobby, you cannot do it in your home. If you like to play instruments, you cannot do it (at) night. However, when you choose comics, you can do it (at any time of the day) because reading comics is not noisy and not (influenced by the weather or time of day). Also, you can do it (on) a bus, (at) school, and (at) home too because comics are light. You can carry comics without (any problem). When you have time, just do it.

Secondly, you can study from this hobby. You can learn and remember many words from comics. In addition, you don’t have to check them up because comics have (actions) and pictures. You can imagine how to use (the) words. Additionally, (the) reader can have (an) outstanding (thought process) due to the comics. Comics are not just reading words and seeing pictures. Lauren, Perry who wrote “6 reasons You Need to Start Reading Comic Books Readers” said that readers sometimes need to think what a graphic page says, and it connects (to) elevated thinking.

Finally, comics are very fun! You can be anyone (when you get into comics!) Like (a) hero, (a) witch, (or) a princess. You can go anywhere too. You will also enjoy (thinking about the ending of the comic). Besides, (the) fun of comics is not only reading, but (discussing them). After (you are done) reading, you can recommend them (to) friends, or you can search (for) people who read same comics (on the) internet. Then you can talk about the comics. You may hear different opinion and findings. In addition, (the) fun of comics might make you enjoy reading books. Writer of How Comics Helped My Kids Love Reading, Sierra Filucci said that her son really hated reading books, but now, he could understand (the) fun of reading (due to) comics..
Filucci, Sierra. How Comics Helped My Kid Love Reading. Common Sense, 2016,www.commonsensemedia.org/blog/how-comics-helped-my-kid-love-reading#.7/14/2016
As you can see, comics are good at time, places, studying, and enjoying. I think that reading comics is (the) best hobby, and I strongly (recommend you) try to read comics. Comics will make your life happier

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8 de novembro de 2016