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"11.11 (About Double 11)
Do you know what's " Double 11" means is?Actually, it's November 11th. Annual Nov. 11th is the Singles' Day in China. The four "1's" looks like bare branches, so Chinese slang it for call it "bachelors". At the beginning first, "Double 11" was just a festival for single people, but nowadays, it's more like a festival for shopping. It's kind of like "Black Friday" in America but not yet as crazy like that cause because we buy a lot of stuffs online. You could find all kinds of good deals on items online. On this day, the network will is usually be broken down at 0'o clock midnight. That's so crazy! You will get a nice price to buy goods on this day, and you will find all kinds of goods online (moved above)What about me? Did I get what I want? I just got bought three stuffs things. I really liked a pair of trousers, but I missed it. T.T People are so crazy!
What about singles' day? hmm... I really don't want to talk about this that><it should="" be="" a="" festival="" to="" makes="" single="" people="" feel="" more="" comfortable,but="" and="" couples="" like="" show="" their="" love="" this="" day="" ,that's="" really="" hurt="" the="" people,lol.<br=""></it> This year's "Double 11" will be end soon, but don't worry, "Double 12" is on the way.^^
"11.11 (About Double 11)
Do you know what " Double 11" is?
Actually, it's November 11th. Annual Nov. 11th is Singles' Day in China. The four "1's" looks like bare branches, so Chinese call it "bachelors". At first, "Double 11" was just a festival for single people, but nowadays, it's more like a festival for shopping. It's kind of like "Black Friday" in America but not as crazy because we buy a lot of stuff online. You could find all kinds of good deals on items online. On this day, the network is usually down at midnight. That's so crazy! What about me? Did I get what I want? I just got bought three things. I really liked a pair of trousers, but I missed it. T.T People are so crazy!
What about singles' day? hmm... I really don't want to talk about that><it should="" be="" a="" festival="" to="" makes="" single="" people="" feel="" more="" comfortable,but="" and="" couples="" like="" show="" their="" love="" this="" day="" ,that's="" really="" hurt="" the="" people,lol.<br=""></it> This year's "Double 11" will be end soon, but don't worry, "Double 12" is on the way.^^"
