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What I needed I talked to some people for these 4 months in italki. After a long working, I talked with my itaIki friend and laughed a lot. Even when I had a sad news, the conversation with them made me feel better. Then I realised that all of them had warm hearts and that was what I needed. This is the basis of being a person. Although people often forget it and become selfish, being nice to others and make them warm is always necessary and natural emotion. Thank you for your reading.

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What I needed

I talked to some people during these past 4 months on italki.

After a long time working, I talked with my itaIki friend and laughed a lot. Even when I had a sad news, the conversations with them made me feel better.

Then I realised that all of them had warm hearts and that was what I needed.

This is the basis of people. Although people often forget it and become selfish, it is always natural and necessary  to be nice to somebody and make them feel good.

Thank you for your reading.


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What I needed

I have been talking to some people for these last 4 months in on italki.
After a long working  after working hard , I talked with my itaIki friends and laughed a lot. Even when I had a sad news to tell , the conversation with them made me feel better.
Then I realised that all of them had warm hearts and that was what I needed.
This is the basis of people. Although people often forget it and become selfish, it is always natural, necessarily to be nice to somebody and make them feel warm.

Thank you for your reading.

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