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Describing the life cycle of honey bee The diagram gives information about various stages of the life cycle of the honeybees. In general, it takes 34-36 days to complete a whole cycle, and we can see there are 5 stages of the life history of the honeybee, from egg to mature insect. The life cycle starts with adult feels producing 1-2 eggs on a regular basis of 2-3 days. Then, 9-10 days after eggs are laid, new born bees, which are still far from their maturity, are hatched. Before honey bees reach maturity, they moult 3 times. Normally, the moulting first occurs 5 days after honey bees are born. The next moulting stage took place 7 days later and the last one 9 days later, when a nymph is developed into a young adult. In a time frame of 4 days, a young adult bee grows into maturity.
19 de fev de 2017 08:44
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Describing the life cycle of honey bee

The diagram gives information about various stages of the life cycle of the honey bees. In general, it takes between 34  and 36 days to complete a whole cycle, and we can see that there are five stages of the life cycle of the honey bee, from egg to mature insect.
The life cycle starts with the adult feels producing laying one or two eggs on a regular basis intervals of two to three days. Then, 9-10 Nine to ten days after the eggs are laid, newly-born bees which are still far from their maturity are hatched.
Before honey bees reach maturity, they moult three times. Normally, the first moulting occurs five days after honey bees are born. The next moulting stage takes place seven days later and the last one nine days later when a nymph is developed develops into a young adult. In a time frame of   In the next four days, a young adult bee reaches full maturity. grows into maturity.

Hi Louis, 

You are provided a very detailed description of the metamorphosis of honey bees. Do take note that you are describing a recurring cycle, as I noticed that you used past tense (eg moulting stage took place 7 days later). It should be in the present tense.

Cheers, 
Lance

19 de fevereiro de 2017
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Describing the life cycle of honey bee

The diagram gives information about various stages of the life cycle of the honeybees. In general, it takes 34-36 days to complete a whole cycle, and we can see there are 5 stages of the life history of the honeybee, from egg to mature insect.
The life cycle starts with adult feels (females?) producing 1-2 eggs on a regular basis of 2-3 days. Then, 9-10 days after eggs are laid, newborn bees, which are still far from their maturity, are hatched hatch.
Before honey bees reach maturity, they moult 3 times. Normally, the moulting first occurs 5 days after honey bees are born. The next moulting stage took takes place 7 days later and the last one 9 days later, when a nymph is developed develops into a young adult. In a time frame of 4 days, a young adult bee grows into maturity.



Very nicely done!

19 de fevereiro de 2017
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