my first time in London with french people part 2
I took classes to improve my english at International House London that was very awesome . I have been supervised by a good teachers that i liked their way of teaching . There were a lot of spanish people who was really motivated . I was in a good team. There's a lot of good things in London but also a bad things like the weather for example most of time is cloudy as the english people confirmed. the transport is very expensive and the cost of life in generale. Even if I never eat it I think the English breakfast is too fat than the French one which is pretty light. Then I did my insurance number and openned a bank account in order to get a job but because of my bad level in English I couldn't work then I went to an exchange language club to practice more and get it quickly . Finally I was forced to return to France because of handling a family's probleme. Don't worry London I'll be back
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My First Time in London with French People part 2
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I took classes to improve my English at International House London that was very awesome . I have been was supervised by a good teacher that I liked and their way of teaching . There were a lot of Spaniards spanish people who were really motivated. I was in a good team. There's a lot of good things in London but also a few bad things like the weather. For example most of time it is cloudy as the English people confirmed. The transport is very expensive and the cost of life in general. Even if I never eat it, I think the English breakfast is too fat compared to than that of the French déjeuner which is pretty light. Then I did used my insurance number and opened a bank account in order to get a job but because of my low level in English I couldn't work. Then I went to an exchange language club to practice more and learn get it quickly . Finally I was forced to return to France because of handling a family problems. Don't worry London I'll be back.0
My first time in London with the French, part 2
I took classes to improve my Eenglish at International House, London and they were awesome . I was supervised by good teachers and I liked their way of teaching . There were many Spaniards who were really motivated . I was in a good team. There's a lot of good things in London but also some bad, like the weather. For example, most of time it is cloudy as the English will confirm. Transport is very expensive and the cost of living, in general. Even though I never ate them, I think the English breakfast is too fatty and that the French one is pretty light. Then I got my insurance number and opened a bank account in order to get a job but because of my bad English I couldn't work, so I went to a labour exchange club to practice it more and quickly improve it. Finally I was forced to return to France because of family problems. Don't worry London; I'll be back.Very well written!
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