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Essay about Smart clothes Somebody can help me to review this writting? Nowadays, many companies request employees to wear smart clothes. Some people think this is unnecessary, perhaps because they consider other aspects more important. Firstly, in some jobs as office or a bank, employees must dress up because they are dealing with customers. On the whole, people prefer to keep in contact with a person with a good image in this kind of job as the presentation conveys a degree of seriousness, trustworthy and a good attitude for them. In fact, the first impression is very important because the dress code has a high impact on it. The clothes that usually employees wear if they are man is an elegant suit with a tie, but if they are women wear a dress and both of them put on smart shoes. Neverthelesess, in others jobs like a gym we see the trainers wear sports dress it. Is clear that although they have contact with people they do not need to wear a smart clothes. Finally, using smart clothes depends on the kind of job and environment, as mentioned above in some jobs is needless.

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Essay about Smart clothes

Can Somebody can help me to review this writting?

Nowadays, many companies request (that)  employees to wear smart (dress) clothes. Some people think this is unnecessary, perhaps because they consider other aspects more important.
Firstly, in some jobs such as in an office or a bank, employees must dress up because they are dealing with customers. On the whole, people prefer to keep in contact with a person with a good image in this kind of job as the presentation conveys a degree of seriousness, trustworthiness and a good attitude for them. In fact, the first impression is very important because and the dress code has a high impact on it.
The clothes that usually employees usually wear if they are a man is an elegant suit with a tie, but if they are a women wear a dress and both of them put on smart shoes.
Neverthelesess, in others jobs like in a gym we see the trainers wear sports dress. It is clear that although they have contact with people they do not need to wear a smart clothes.
Finally, using smart clothes depends on the kind of job and environment, as mentioned above in some jobs it is needless.


Well written Jessy! Let me know if you have any questions about these corrections.

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Essay about Smart clothes

Can somebody help me to review this writing?

Nowadays, many companies request employees to dress smart. Some people think this is unnecessary, perhaps because they consider other aspects more important.
Firstly, in some jobs, such as in an office or a bank, employees must dress up because they are dealing with customers. As a whole, people prefer to keep in contact with a person with a good image in this kind of job as the presentation conveys a degree of seriousness, trustworthiness and a good attitude. In fact, the first impression is very important because the dress code has a high impact on it.
The clothes that employees usually wear if they are man are an elegant suit with a tie, but if they are women, they wear a dress, but both of them put on smart shoes.
Nevertheless, in other jobs like in a gym, we see the trainers wear sports clothes. It is clear that, although they have contact with people, they do not need to dress so smart.
Finally, wearing smart clothes depends on the kind of job and environment, as mentioned above, in some jobs, it is not needed.
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Essay about Smart clothes

Can somebody can help me to review this writing?

Nowadays,  many companies request that  employees to wear smart clothes. Some people think this is unnecessary, perhaps because they consider other aspects to be  more important.
Firstly, in some jobs, such as in an office or a bank, employees must dress up smart because they are dealing with customers. On the whole, people prefer to keep in contact deal with a person with a good image in this kind of job as their presentation conveys a degree of seriousness, trustworthiness and a good attitude for towards them. In fact, the first impression is very important because the dress code has a high impact on it this.
The clothes that usually employees usually wear, if they are man, is an elegant (smart) suit with a tie, but if they are women a woman would wear a dress and both of them would put on smart shoes.
Nevertheless, in others jobs like in a gymnasium we see the trainers wear sports dress it clothes. It is clear that although they have contact with people they do not need to wear a smart clothes.
Finally, using wearing smart clothes depends on the kind of job and the environment, as mentioned above, in some jobs it is needless not necessary.



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