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Alice
Disappoint All these days, I thought a lot, and went through an indelible thing, it was so disgusting, gross, freaky that makes me have a bad impression of Londoner, I know, I shouldn’t take a part for the whole, but I really can’t help it. I don’t want to think like that, but the feeling can’t be cheat. I really shocked about that thing. As we all know, first impression is very important. However, the behaviors can’t be neglect, too. I oughtn’t to generalize about people, absolutely, but insult people are a rude behavior. I don’t approve judge people solely by their appearance, but I want to say some people’s conduct is really let me down,and scared me,I afraid make friends with strangers now.I draw a conclusion, not everybody wants to be your friend sincerely.

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Disappoint
Disappointed

All these days, I thought a lot, and went through an indelible thing,
Recently, I've been thinking about an experience I can't forget.

it was so disgusting, gross, freaky that makes me have a bad impression of Londoner,
It was so disgusting, gross, and freaky that I now have a bad impression of Londoners.

I know, I shouldn’t take a part for the whole, but I really can’t help it.
I know I shouldn't generalize, but I really can't help it.

I don’t want to think like that, but the feeling can’t be cheat.
I don’t want to think like that, but I can't deny my feelings

I really shocked about that thing. As we all know, first impression is very important.
I was really shocked about that thing.  As we all know, first impressions are very important. 

However, the behaviors can’t be neglect, too.
However, experiences can’t be neglected, either

I oughtn’t to generalize about people, absolutely, but insult people are a rude behavior.
I shouldn't generalize about people, absolutely.  Insulting people is rude.  
[Were you insulted or are you planning to insult someone else?]

I don’t approve judge people solely by their appearance, but I want to say some people’s conduct is really let me down,and scared me,
I don’t think you should judge people solely by their appearance (actions?), but I want to say some people’s conduct is really let me down.
appearance or conduct?

I afraid make friends with strangers now.
I am afraid to make friends with strangers now.

I draw a conclusion, not everybody wants to be your friend sincerely.
I now know not everybody sincerely wants to be your friend. 

I hope you're ok.  There are good people in the world, but you need to be careful.

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Disappointed
Recently, I've been thinking about an experience I can't forget.
It was so disgusting, gross, and freaky that I now have a bad impression of strangers
I know I shouldn't generalize, but I really can't help it.
I don’t want to think like that, but I can't deny my feelings. 
I was really shocked about that thing.  As we all know, first impressions are very important. 
However, experiences can’t be neglected, either. 
I shouldn't generalize about people, absolutely.  Insulting people is rude.  
I don’t approve judge people solely by their appearance, but I want to say some people’s conduct is really let me down,and scared me,
I don’t think you should judge people solely by their appearance , but I want to say some people’s conduct is really let me down.
I am afraid to make friends with strangers now.
I now know not everybody sincerely wants to be your friend. 
But I believe there are most  good people in the world.



 

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Thanks,Neal,he is not on italki.l know,every country exists some immoral people,so, of course I won't think all the British is.It's unwise to take a part for the whole.
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The behaviour that you are hinting at is not acceptable in any society, Alice. If this was someone on iTalki you should block them and you must report them to the moderators too. I sincerely hope you won't judge all English people by this one bad experience.

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