Mentawai Island In West Sumatera Indonesia
Mentawai Island in West Sumatera is the most popular tourism place for surfing. This island provides the advantages for extreme sport like surfing. It has a consistent and internasional waves which the waves can be reach a height 7 meters. The waves on Mentawai Island is the third best in the world. Therefore a lot of surfers from Europe visit this island when summer holiday in Europe to enjoy the greatest wave. Moreover, there is an event such as World Champion Surfing that is held annually in August. In addition, the government provides facilities such as resorts, bars, 60 waves exclusive spot, and comfort and security for surfing. Briefly, Mentawai Island has an extraordinary wave for surfer which is the most famous in Indonesia till over the world.
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Mentawai Island in West Sumatra, Indonesia
Mentawai Island in West Sumatra is the most popular tourism place spot (<--Out of habit, English speakers say "tourism spot.") for surfing. This island provides the advantages for extreme sports like surfing. It has a consistent and international waves in which the waves can be reach a height of seven (<--It's best to write out whole numbers less than twelve as words most of the time.) meters. The waves on Mentawai Island is are the third best in the world. Therefore, a lot of surfers from Europe visit this island when during summer holidays in Europe (<--This is redundant.) to enjoy the greatest (<--You said they're the third best in the world, so here, they can't also be "the greatest.") waves. Moreover, there is an event such known as (<--"Such as" means "for example.") World Champion Surfing that is held annually in August. In addition, the government provides facilities such as resorts, bars, 60 waves exclusive spots, and comfort and security for surfing. Briefly In summary, Mentawai Island has an extraordinary waves for surfers which that is the most famous in Indonesia till for people from all over the world.Here you go, Hartaty. I hope my corrections help =)
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Mentawai Island in West Sumatera is the most popular place with tourists place for surfing. This island provides the advantages for extreme sports like surfing. It has a consistent and internasional waves which the waves can be reach a height of 7 meters. The waves on Mentawai Island is are the third best in the world. Therefore a lot of surfers from Europe visit this island when during European summer holidays in Europe to enjoy the greatest waves. Moreover, there is an event such as called the World Surfing Championship that is held annually in August. In addition, the government provides facilities such as resorts, bars, 60 exclusive waves spots, and comfort and security for surfing. Briefly, In summary, Mentawai Island has an extraordinary waves for surfers which is are the most famous in Indonesia till and over around the world.
Nice work! I crossed out "internasional" because I was not sure what you meant there- if you meant to write "international" I don't think this is the correct word here. Overall very good!
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